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J.G. Phoenix

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Begin (2024)

2023 ended weirdly abruptly for me, but I got the shot in the arm I needed in order to hit the ground running in 2024. This year's going to be absolutely crazy, but for me personally, I feel my worst years are finally behind me. I'm ready to stop drowning in a sea of...

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Expanding Kaiser Lore

One of the most annoying things about fleshing out these World War II inspired factions is that there isn't enough territory in the setting to go around. I mean we've got America, the UK, Germany, France, Japan, etcetera. There are only a handful of habitable worlds,...

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Thumbnails Finished

The thumbnails for the Admiral Hipper, Cosmo Messer F2, and the KM-3s missile are finished. A bit rushed but they all look decent enough, especially the F2. Have a look. I also squished the frames a little to give the subjects more screen space. Once again, I think...

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Cosmo Messer F2 Progress

It's pretty much finished. Unfortunately there are still some workshop related things I need to do and I don't quite have enough time for all of that tonight. Hopefully I'll have it sorted by tomorrow or sometime in the middle of the week, but if not, next weekend at...

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Same Format?

by | May 18, 2022 | Journal, LGT

I’m pretty sure at this point that I’m going to need at least one more editing pass for Armor of the Unburdened, but I’m not sure if I should use the same format as the previous editing sessions. They’re informative and don’t take especially long to make, but I also feel like that format makes me slightly more prone to missing things that need a different kind of trimming down. I tend to focus too much on outright verbosity and mistakes rather than trying to word each and every line slightly better.

There’s also probably some time and distance coming into this as well. You’re not improving if you don’t look back and take issue with your work. At some point I have to call it quits on editing and move on, but until the story as a whole is finished, I think I get a free pass to go back and tweak things here and there.

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Begin (2024)

2023 ended weirdly abruptly for me, but I got the shot in the arm I needed in order to hit the ground running in 2024. This year's going to be absolutely crazy, but for me personally, I feel my worst years are finally behind me. I'm ready to stop drowning in a sea of...

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Yamato Progress

Oh my goodness ... well, things may have slowed down exponentially compared to the first 24 hours of working on this thing, but that doesn't mean there hasn't been major progress. Check this out. The exterior is nearly finished (minus coloring) The catapults work...

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