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J.G. Phoenix

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I just ran into something annoying. The pagination controls for the blog post modules I use aren’t fully visible with the site’s current look. Normally this would be an easy fix but the controls for that don’t work for some reason, so without some html wizardry (which I don’t have enough of) I can’t bring them in line with everything else. I didn’t even realize the pagination links were even there until I started messing around. I wasn’t sure whether to laugh or groan when I finally saw them.

I can see posts from farther than a week back just fine since that’s backend viewing, but no one browsing the site could without the search function. Not ideal. I’m looking into it since it’s a really basic problem that should even be present. I want visitors to be able to check back as far as they like without having to search by category or some other method. Right now I have to focus on Atoning Mirror and Fleeing Victory, but I’ll be poking around on the side to find a full fix that works with the current look of the site.

I updated the category browsing so it actually works now. I hadn’t tested that so it’s about time. Now, if you click on a category listed in a post, it should bring you to a page with a good backlog of posts from said category. I put a faint background color in the category pages as a temporary fix; you can at least see the pagination text this way. That’s as close to a fix as I can do without some research.

Lastly, I’m working on a category list for the blog so you don’t have to navigate to a post with the category you’re looking for first. The widget customizations aren’t playing any nicer with the theme than the pagination text, so that won’t be up for a while longer. I can still do it manually, so that’s an option. It’ll just take longer.

That’s all for now o7

Wrapping Up October

It’s definitely crunch time. Fleeing Victory #5 wrapped up in a way that will make #6 much easier to do. Minor cliffhangers like that are great for this. As of this post, there’s roughly four days left for me to take care of that and Atoning Mirror.

I’m not worried about FV#6, but Atoning Mirror is a much bigger challenge. It’s like writing an episode for a tv series. I also have a new character to introduce on top of fleshing out some of the main cast. It’s a lot to cram into just a handful of scenes.

I’ll get it done before the deadline, even if it’s down to the last hour in my time zone. Then the focus shifts to November.

That’s all for now.

Fleeing Victory #5

Sisters Sandoval

“Ah, you’ve come to.”

As Fran came to her senses, the first words she heard were in her mother tongue. She could remember running for her life; Fran apparently hadn’t gotten very far on her own. She heard aircraft engines and the whistling of large missiles getting louder and louder as she tried to get away. She could feel the enormous footfalls of the colossus Cordoba as it quickly caught up to her. Needless to say, Jinete Team’s leader had questions.

“What happened? How did I get here?” A quick scan of the room revealed that the scout leader was in an infirmary. It had been ages since Fran visited one in person. She wasn’t in the habit of getting injured, much less knocked cold.

The clinician standing at her bedside smiled as if he had an amusing joke ready and waiting for his confused patient. Fran actually recognized the man. It was Doctor Gil, a man responsible for more than just treating the wounded and handling medicine. “Something interesting happened according to the reports,” he told her.

“Interesting?” Fran cocked an eyebrow, wondering where he was going with this.

Gil nodded. “Yes. From what I read, the Cordoba didn’t retreat right away. It ran over and scooped you, first. Only then did it activate its displacement drive. The bombs were probably already exploding all around you both by the time the drive was activated. That would explain the damage the Cordoba suffered, as well as our finding you unconscious.”

“Cordoba saved me?” No one could tell Fran she wasn’t grateful, but why in the world would the colossus endanger itself to protect one doomed scout leader? She supposed that her death in particular would have severe knock-on effects for her family. It would also cripple the Jinete Team. Even so, the Cordaeans couldn’t be allowed to destroy the Cordoba, especially not during its final trials. That was just unthinkable.

“Doctor, was Cordoba programmed for rescue tactics?”

“I don’t know,” Gil shrugged, “I’m sure they’re looking into that as we speak.”

That was Fran’s cue to get back to work. She slid her legs off of the bed and braced herself, fully expecting to feel lightheaded once she was up. “I should look into it, too.” Sure enough, she had to hold still for a moment to keep her balance. “If that’s all, I’ll be going now.”

“Try to get some more rest, Captain Sandoval. You won’t be back on duty for some time yet. Oh and don’t forget to make your report. Yours is the only one they’re still waiting for.”

“Understood.”

By the time Fran made it back to her quarters at Fort baldi, she had been greeted by no fewer than twenty people. Most were relieved she was alright. Others were celebrating some supposed victory, something Fran found perplexing. While the Cordaeans had retreated, it was obvious to her, and likely to her superiors, the Cordaeans had learned everything they needed to about Cordoba. That would drastically limit its effectiveness going forward. The only thing worth celebrating was Cordoba’s survival.

The door to Fran’s quarters opened to a barren, sterile room. All she found there was a bed, a chair and a desk. On a temporary assignment like hers, Fran hardly stood out in that regard. The only reason she wasn’t in a barracks was due to her rank in the Munican Army. Private quarters, however dull, were her due, and they were always inside the HQ buildings wherever officers were stationed.

First things first, Fran thought as she filled out a field report at her desk. She was as objective on matters as she could be, which led her to one gut wrenching conclusion near the end of her report. She had been careless with the Cordaean crewman. Even if Audaz, her personal draque, had the man pinned, she should have stopped him from relaying anything to his superiors. Commune specialists were everywhere on the battlefield. She should have knocked him out, maybe even shot him.

Poor Audaz. The draque she had ridden since her days in training leaped to mind as she wrapped up her report. Draques were practically immune to small arms fire, but a round from an arma of almost any size was potentially deadly. The last she saw of Audaz, he was sprawled out on the ground and helpless. Maybe he was the only one lost to the bombers. The others had plenty of time to fall back.

Fran stood up from her desk, report signed and folded for convenience. “Alright. I’ll hand this in and then see Cordoba and its handlers.”

Fort Baldi was situated just outside of officially recognized Munican territory, but it was well within their ability to defend from the Cordaeans and other foreign threats alike. This allowed massive expansions over the years, expansions that included deep underground facilities. One of these facilities was a hangar dedicated to the Munican Colossus Cordoba and its equipment. If that machine was anywhere on the base, it would be there, away from prying eyes. Fran suspected some of the higher ups would be there, learning what they could about Cordoba’s antics. Her sister, Lieutenant Colonel Valencia Sandoval, might be there as well.

As Fran entered the hangar, she saw Cordoba surrounded by scaffolding and sparks as repair teams raced to undo the damage inflicted by the Cordaean bombers. Overlooking the whole scene nearby was a group of officers, including Fran’s sister and the General of the Army. She was hesitant to approach. General Cruz being here was quite the shock, but eventually Fran found her nerve.

“Captain,” Valencia greeted her with a nod.

“Lieutenant Colonel,” Fran saluted her older sister and the other officers, “Generals.”

Although Fran was the younger of the two, she and Valencia might have passed for twins with a little effort. Even now, Fran’s facade, her raven black hair, was beginning to fade. If she left it alone, her hair would eventually go back to matching the Lieutenant Colonel’s vibrant silver hair.

Major General Cano took a step forward with open arms and a big smile. “So you’re the damsel the Cordoba decided to save. Well met.”

“We were going to send for you once you were awake,” Valencia said, glancing briefly at Cordoba.

“I already handed in my report, but I’ll answer any questions you have,” Fran said, straightening up. She didn’t know whether to expect easy questions, or an outright barrage.

“Hmph,” General Cruz turned fully to face Fran. “I figured you would be the one with questions, Captain. We have only one for you.”

“Just one?” Fran winced. She didn’t mean to say that out loud, but it was too late to hide her surprise.

“Indeed.” General Cruz stepped out in front of the other officers and approached the railing overlooking the Cordoba. Fran followed his gaze to the massive machine and the work being done on it. “It’s almost time. Once all systems are fully online, Operation: Enduring Fury will begin. Lieutenant Colonel Sandoval will be made second in command of the Cordoba and all supporting units. Command will go to Colonel Berti.”

Fran only had to wonder briefly what any of this had to do with her.

“How would you feel about the Jinete Team also being transferred to the new unit, Captain?”

“You want my opinion, sir?” This was unusual. Fran hadn’t known higher ranking officers in the army to consider anyone’s personal preferences. General Cruz, whom she had only just met, was different for whatever reason. “I certainly wouldn’t mind.”

“That matter is settled, then,” Cruz nodded at her.

Only a few officers looked put off by the idea, but they wouldn’t dare speak out about it now. Maybe that nod wasn’t just for her.

“Now Captain, did you have any questions about the Cordoba? Now that you’re in our new ‘Cordoba Corp,’ you’ll have a full briefing in the morning along with the rest of Jinete. Anything you have on your mind right now can be addressed right here.”

Fran supposed her main reason for coming here was to better understand the colossus. Before the Cordaeans made their push toward the Rojo Mountains, all she was told was that the Cordoba would be performing more tests in battle, using a dusk weaver storm for concealment. The Jinete Team was to wait until it was safe to move in, and survey the results. Everything was going fine until the third attack. The Cordaeans found the dusk weaver and blew it up, exposing the Cordoba in the process. Then … then something strange happened.

“Cordoba saved me from the attack,” Fran said, “I was wondering why.”

“Me too,” Cruz said, barely resisting a chuckle, “but if the Cordoba’s programmers aren’t just covering for each other, it’s not something as simple as a ‘rescue’ subroutine for high profile officers. No, this is apparently something in the prime program. It is a core part of the Cordoba’s runic brain. Of course, that means there’s no switch anywhere that we can flip on or off to control that type of behavior.”

“Cordoba spent valuable time trying to get me out of there. It endangered itself for one officer, General. I don’t even know if it’s because I’m an officer or if it was just trying to save one person. Are we sure that’s not going to be a problem in the future?”

“While I hesitate to call this quirk of the Cordoba’s a design flaw, it will greatly impact our ability to integrate the platform into our regular forces. Don’t let it bother you, Captain. We’ve always worked around our limitations. This is no different. We do need to run one additional test; we need to know what it will do when a direct order conflicts with this little ‘savior quirk.'”

Fran agreed. The Cordoba’s actions had been worth it, this time, but what if it tried to save someone else and got itself destroyed in the process?

“Was there anything else, Captain? If not I’ll let your sister handle the rest.”

[Intruder Alert]

[Intruder Alert]

[Intruder Alert]

Fran’s eyes went wide in shock.

“An intruder?” Cruz’s head tilted slightly.

“At Fort Baldi?” Major General Cano said, “How is that possible?”

Intruders at Fort Baldi was a terrible sign. The implications were too numerous to even deal with at the moment. They had to focus on getting a handle on the situation first. Most of the high ranking officers present were beside themselves.

Valencia remained stoic, and Fran noticed her sister pulling her gloves tighter and tighter, something she only did when she was gearing up for a fight.

“Fran, we’re going,” Valencia said, starting off ahead of her sister.

“Understood,” Fran fell in behind. It felt like nothing had changed since she joined the army. Even as teenagers, their roles were always the same: Fran would find what they were looking for and Valencia would handle the dirty work.

“Leave this to us, General. We’ll coordinate the defense and deal with the intrusion, whether it’s just one or one hundred.”

General Cruz seemed just fine with the idea. “Get it done, then. I’m looking forward to a favorable report.”

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World of Warships: Halloween Short Story Submission

World of Warships is doing a Halloween themed ship stories contest. I was interested so I tried to come up with something for it.

The World of Warships

Something was wrong. Commander Albert Wentzel could feel it in his gut. He and his crew were ordered to set sail for Two Brothers, a battlefield where a million men had laid down their lives. While the fleet was being divided, Wentzel tried to place a call to the Fleet Admiral.

When he was first brought to the World of Warships, Wentzel had seen vast seas of opportunity, of glory, of honor, and endless battle. He had amassed a crew of fearless, loyal sailors. He had bested battleships, blown up cruisers, scorched destroyers black, and sent carriers limping away with nary a plane left on their scarred decks. He had seen everything, and he had destroyed everything.

The battleship commander had also been bested himself. Wentzel remembered what it felt like, to be surrounded, overwhelmed by incoming fire, and killed. He and his crew knew death, in all of its gruesome forms. In this world, death was inevitable. The only question was victory. Wentzel and his men always looked ahead, to victory and victory alone.

Through countless battles, the commander rose up the ranks until he was able to take command of the most powerful German battleship, the Großer Kurfürst. He had captained the Bayern and the Gneisenau. He had indulged in the legend of the Bismarck. He had experienced the full might of the Friedrich der Große. Wentzel earned his glorious command, and his crew had served with distinction from the outset.

Now Commander Albert Wentzel was here, standing on the bridge of … the Scharnhorst. The Scharnhorst was a good ship, fast and exceptionally well protected. Even so, just being here troubled him greatly. He was one of the most well known and respected men in this world. He should be on the bridge of the Kurfürst. In the beginning, he dared not ask the Fleet Admiral about the decision to reassign him. Now he was frustrated enough to try.

“Admiral, tell me why. What is the purpose of our reassignment to the Scharnhorst?”

“Almost to 21 points. Just a little more,” said a voice on the far end of the line.

“Admiral?”

“Yeah, well I’m sick of that broken sub, so we’re playing lower tiers.”

Useless, Wentzel thought. The Fleet Admiral always seemed to be talking right past him, speaking in riddles, telling jokes, and answering questions no one asked. Wentzel stayed on the line regardless. There was still a little time, and he needed answers.

When the fleets arrived at Two Brothers, Commander Wentzel prepared for a tactic many thought suicidal. He planned a delayed, but otherwise direct assault on the enemy fleet between the two islands comprising Two Brothers. The tactic had failed as many times as it had won him and his fleet the battle. Victory to the bold and the cunning; death to the timid and the stupid.

Albert would have to hang up and see to the battle soon, so he made one last attempt to get an answer out of the Fleet Admiral. When he put the phone to his ear, what he heard sent chills down his spine.

“You brought the wrong ship!”

“What?” Albert swallowed hard. Was there some kind of miscommunication between them? Knowing the Admiral, almost certainly.

“Haarlem’s a tier 8! Oh we @#%!&* up. Fail div.”

What was a fail div? “Admiral, please. Why were we reassigned?” Wentzel hoped that whatever he meant by wrong ship, it would somehow lead to him commanding the Kurfürst again.

There was a long pause, but eventually, the Fleet Admiral gave him an answer.

He would never forget those dreaded words.

“There it is. Balao.”

Wentzel slammed the phone down and stormed out of the bridge.

Balao. That cursed submarine. That bane of banes. Wentzel had sunken more than his fair share of submarines in recent months, but in turn, his beloved Großer Kurfürst had also been devastated time and time again. Wentzel remembered each time the credit for his destruction went to the Balao. He knew all too well why the Fleet Admiral wouldn’t let him be bested a fourth time. That submarine had cost him the command of the ship he loved so dearly.

Even knowing the Balao was the source of all his troubles, there was little he could do about it. There was another battle in front of him, and the Fleet Admiral was rambling about the Haarlem and something called a fail div. Just once would the man say something coherent?

Commander Wentzel returned to the bridge of the Scharnhorst and steeled himself for the battle ahead.

The Scharnhorst waited until well into the battle before beginning her push through the center of the two islands, but Wentzel received numerous reports in the meantime. Almost none of the news was good. Ships much more powerful than his were appearing on the far side of the island. Some of them were legendary, like the Yamato. Wentzel feared he might not accomplish nearly as much as he set out to do. There was something unusual about the makeup of the two opposing sides. His plan was set, however. They were going in no matter what.

“Head straight through while they’re distracted on the right flank,” Wentzel ordered, “Once we’re on the far side, we’ll sink the King George, and then capture their-”

“We’ve been pinged by a submarine, sir!”

“Torpedoes, just off the bow!”

They had barely made it into position when everything fell apart. The Scharnhorst lacked hydro-acoustic search equipment, and by the time anyone was able to spot the torpedoes, the helmsman could do nothing. Everyone braced for impact, but Wentzel stole a glance at the deadly wakes. Was he seeing things, or were there six of them?

“No.”

“There it is. Balao.” The Fleet Admiral’s words suddenly sounded like a warning.

“What is the Balao doing here?!” Wentzel cried out.

“We’ve been pinged again!”

“… oh my God ….”

This was a fun little thing to write on the side. I’m not sure if fail divs are spooky per se, or even facing off against the Balao, but there’s a weird ‘parallel worlds’ thing going on that Wentzel hasn’t caught onto, and that makes things just a little bit unsettling. I actually wouldn’t mind making an actual series out of this since the game has plenty of characters to either use as is or take inspiration from.

We’ll see. I just went through the trouble of writing it so I figured it should be on the blog as well.

So Close (FV#5)

I won’t have enough time to finish and polish up Fleeing Victory #5 tonight. So, so close. A couple more hours, maybe. It should be done by tomorrow.

It’s fine, but I just have to clinch my fist when an idea doesn’t quite come together in time. There’s also been some progress on Atoning Mirror (LGT), though not nearly as much. I might have gotten it done today if I wasn’t hopping back and forth between the two, but LGT is more important, so I do need to spend time on it everyday. Until November gets here, I’m just focusing on these two to make sure I meet those self-imposed deadlines.

Fleeing Victory #5 will be up sometime tomorrow.

It figures it would be a Tuesday, now that I think about it.