I overshot with that afternoon nap, but I did figure out a couple of things for making the ‘throughline’ of Lydia’s Golden Treasury stronger. Chapter 3’s also going to need a few specific edits to fall more in line with a few things I noticed in Chapter 1, mainly, some very specific things that were said and some others things that weren’t said in that first chapter.
Trust me, it’s important, especially for Chapter 3.
For now I need to focus on getting Chapter 2 written up so I can get that gap I made plugged back up. I don’t know if I’ll have it finished by the end of this month, but I’ve definitely got enough time, so that’s what I’m aiming for.